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Chill

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These dark thoughts,
Bring my pulse to a stop,
The darkness spreads,
Polluting my soul,
Until the final wave sets in,
A cold,
Unfeeling frost,
That permeates my being,
And makes me nothing.
Wow....that was unexpectedly dark. I am in such a bad mood >.>

But in any case, I hope you enjoyed it and constructive criticism is totally welcome!

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4defyinggravity's avatar
Very dark and interesting. You're welcome to join #LiteratureGroup and submit it. Link: literaturegroup.deviantart.com